Dreamscape

• Dreamscape by Agents For Harm [acoustic] 15 points. last published 8 months ago share

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• 10wattmindtrip 7 points 19 months ago

  This song has potential, but there‘s something I can‘t quite put my finger on that‘s bugging me about it. It might be that it sounds as if you‘re holding back on the vocals a bit. I‘m not certain. Good song though.

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• simonb 4 points 19 months ago

  nice verse. desperately needs a chorus

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  • uiuiui 6 points 8 months ago

    i agree with simonb: you have a nice verse, then a bridge that could nicely lead somewhere.. now you just need to take it there. But it is often like that when you have a really good verse it's difficult to come up with a chorus that takes the song to yet a higher level of intensity ; ... good luck!

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• grocerybagman 1 point 19 months ago

  Sounds a little loose but it works. I like the fact that it barebones.

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